Pages 1, 6, and 7

hollow · Joined: 09 Jan 2004 Posts: 318

Hooray for page 1! Now that's a great intro page. Let's hope she picks the one-piece.

(I think you have an extraneous comma after "one-piece".)

I wonder what Hex's full name is.

That chair and floor look familiar. Is Morgan around?

BotM-6: Wet Dream looks... okay, I guess. (As usual, I'm not crazy about the chest-exposing outfit.) And her helmet looks like it's out of Frankenstein's lab. I love her figure, though.

BotM-7: This pose has always seemed weird to me. Shouldn't her legs go -over- the other person's shoulders? And what's got them having such a good time, anyway?

HSHP · Joined: 09 Jan 2004 Posts: 309

hollow wrote: BotM-7: This pose has always seemed weird to me. Shouldn't her legs go -over- the other person's shoulders? And what's got them having such a good time, anyway?

Shouldn't they be scissoring each other instead? Also, I thought Jeff said the text would be JPGs again. Personally, I like having them with the pics. I mean, they don't have to be anything fancy like they used to be. That takes time from more important stuff. They can be just as they are, but the text pasted into a JPEG. Please?

Jeff · Joined: 09 Jan 2004 Posts: 422

Okay, I'll see what I can do about coming up with some JPG versions. I want to fluff the text out a little more, too.

-Jeff