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Vanessa



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Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 10:35 am    Post subject: Errata corrige page 24 issue 5  

For your information I made a small mistake in age 24 first pannel.
In it Red's balloon is actually a thought from Betty...What Red is saying is completely different. Since Ronald is out of town I will only be able to correct it after he returns.
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Foxonian



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Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 2:39 pm    Post subject:  

Well,it seem all that unusual to for that comment to come from Red.At least,it didn't seem odd to me.Still,no problem Vanessa! Mistakes are a part of life. ;-)
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UltimaWolf0



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Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 4:45 pm    Post subject:  

Huh, interesting.
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Ashton Gray



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Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 5:47 pm    Post subject:  

I KNEW there was something far out of place with that comment coming from a gentleman like Red Bordeaux! Mistakes are most certainly part of life, but it shows a lot that you owned up to it and mean to correct it, Vanessa.
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LabrnMystic



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Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:03 pm    Post subject:  

It didn't look too out of place Vanessa. I took it that Betty was saying it out loud, but the voice bubble was just a bit too close to Red. I didn't think he was saying both,

*shrugs* Just me I suppose, but I guess I feel the flow and mood of this story well.
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