Pages 4 & 5

[Terry]

'Dark Justice' is off to a very action-packed start! Interesting how both Dark Superior Girl and She-Bulk say basically the same thing while recovering from being on the heavy end of a punch in page 4. It must have been the chip talking when Dark SG dropped that sexual remark about Bulk, as I thought Jessica's alter ego was always about sex. I guess it shows that there are things that will take her mind off gratification - like the prospect of a good catfight! Page 5 shows the I-blinked-and-missed-it appearance of Dark Flasher, and I have to say I like her new duds. Except the platform boots...those just don't seem very practical. I'd think she'd be tripping all over those huge heels when getting up to speed! Her shades are awesome, however. :) Love the blurred yet still visible shots of Flasher behind She-Bulk in the top frame, as well as SB's rather perplexed expression. Nice, nice, nice!


Terry

[Jeff]

The boots aren't very practical for a runner, but I've been on a high-heel kick lately, and they look neat, so that's what I went with. I figure it's a fantasy world, so all the babes never get twisted ankles from stilletto heels, or back pain from carrying around all the 38 double-Ds!

Thanks, and keep watching!
-Jeff

[hollow]

I had pretty much the same reaction as Terry. Flasher's boots are impractical, but what the hey. I definitely like the shades. And the outfit. For a second I expected black for all four, but hot red really is Flasher's color.

Like the detail on page 4: the busted wall, the undone strap, the hair peeking around Supes' face...

I'm really, really excited to see how the story goes. It'd be super if you could achieve the pace here that you have on Battlechix...