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WildTexan
Joined: 26 Mar 2005
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| Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 11:53 pm Post subject: Poem: Passionate Evening |
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Here's an original poem I wrote for my wife. Hope y'all like it:
Passionate Evening
Entangled bodies lying in a midnight air
Sensational feelings jolt in an esoteric flare
Preeminence of your love ever circumfrencing
Desires that wretch my soul forever encompass me
Intimately I caress as you long for my touch
Expediently you submit wanting me so much
Flesh upon flesh emotions at a new height
Forever I am lost in you, forever in the night |
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MartinaWarren
Joined: 22 Dec 2004
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 12:01 am Post subject: |
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| Hey WildTexan, thats a beautiful poem. Your wife is a very lucky woman! :D |
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WildTexan
Joined: 26 Mar 2005
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 12:01 am Post subject: oops |
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| :roll: Terribly sorry. Didn't mean to add a new topic, but to post this as a reply in the topic of Poems! |
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WildTexan
Joined: 26 Mar 2005
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 12:04 am Post subject: |
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:lol: Thank you, Martina! I'm new to the list. Thought I'd check out and see what type of fans you had. They seem to be pretty nice people! You're up late! :o
Here's another I wrote for my wife, hope you like it:
Simplistic thoughts of love's sumptuousness
A destination that is derivative from the heart
Idle are the memories of yesterdays past
Aspirations of hope ever forth coming
Fear now suppressed in solitude
Forever the serene feeling of togetherness
I embrace your loving essence, your smile
Your name upon my lips so divine
Cradled within, the images of beauty
Butterflies abound, tumbling, tumbling evermore
A soul mesmerized in complete admiration
A heart that aches no more
Te amo, Ti amo, I love you. |
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Wildcard
Joined: 16 Jul 2004
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 12:18 am Post subject: |
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| Seems like my literary skills are going to have competition, eh Martina? |
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someoneoutthere
Joined: 15 Feb 2005
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 6:11 am Post subject: |
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| Not from me Wildcard! You are in a league of your own man! |
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Wildcard
Joined: 16 Jul 2004
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 12:08 pm Post subject: |
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someoneoutthere wrote: Not from me Wildcard! You are in a league of your own man!
My most gracious thanks for your meritorious accolade. :) |
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MartinaWarren
Joined: 22 Dec 2004
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 9:59 pm Post subject: Re: oops |
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WildTexan wrote: :roll: Terribly sorry. Didn't mean to add a new topic, but to post this as a reply in the topic of Poems!
Hey, No problem it doesnt really make any difference :) |
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MartinaWarren
Joined: 22 Dec 2004
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 10:01 pm Post subject: |
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WildTexan wrote: :lol: Thank you, Martina! I'm new to the list. Thought I'd check out and see what type of fans you had. They seem to be pretty nice people! You're up late! :o
Here's another I wrote for my wife, hope you like it:
Simplistic thoughts of love's sumptuousness
A destination that is derivative from the heart
Idle are the memories of yesterdays past
Aspirations of hope ever forth coming
Fear now suppressed in solitude
Forever the serene feeling of togetherness
I embrace your loving essence, your smile
Your name upon my lips so divine
Cradled within, the images of beauty
Butterflies abound, tumbling, tumbling evermore
A soul mesmerized in complete admiration
A heart that aches no more
Te amo, Ti amo, I love you.
Wow another beautiful poem! You seem very talented! You have a way with words :D |
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MartinaWarren
Joined: 22 Dec 2004
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 10:01 pm Post subject: |
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Wildcard wrote: Seems like my literary skills are going to have competition, eh Martina?
Lol, Wildcard :lol: |
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WildTexan
Joined: 26 Mar 2005
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 10:23 pm Post subject: For Martina |
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Why thank you! I've posted quite a few poems on Poetry.com. It's a good way of expressing yourself.
Here's one just for you Martina:
Beauty
Hair that touches the light so softly
Lips that move so eloquently
Eyes that sparkle to mystify
Hands that appear so personified
The warmth of flowers deep in bloom
Upon her aura lighting a room
The sure of taste of strawberrys in milk
Her skin like satin that's pure as silk
Like a Mocking bird's song in the air it fills
A voice so lovely my skin it brings chills
A moment a glance a look my way
This is beauty I behold this very day.
Hope you like it. |
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MartinaWarren
Joined: 22 Dec 2004
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 10:41 pm Post subject: Re: For Martina |
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WildTexan wrote: Why thank you! I've posted quite a few poems on Poetry.com. It's a good way of expressing yourself.
Here's one just for you Martina:
Beauty
Hair that touches the light so softly
Lips that move so eloquently
Eyes that sparkle to mystify
Hands that appear so personified
The warmth of flowers deep in bloom
Upon her aura lighting a room
The sure of taste of strawberrys in milk
Her skin like satin that's pure as silk
Like a Mocking bird's song in the air it fills
A voice so lovely my skin it brings chills
A moment a glance a look my way
This is beauty I behold this very day.
Hope you like it.
Thats beautiful WildTexas, im Flattered....Thanks :D |
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Wildcard
Joined: 16 Jul 2004
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 11:00 pm Post subject: |
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| Sounds like WildTexan should have made his forum name something like Rhymin'Romeo. :wink: |
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WildTexan
Joined: 26 Mar 2005
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 11:05 pm Post subject: Ryhmn Romeo? |
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| Nah ... some of us Texan's are sappy old farts who have a knack for writing mushy stuff ... of course, you'd never hear it come out of our mouths when hangin' with the guys! :P |
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Satch
Joined: 23 Dec 2004
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| Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 1:32 am Post subject: |
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WildTexan wrote: :lol: Thank you, Martina! I'm new to the list. Thought I'd check out and see what type of fans you had. They seem to be pretty nice people! You're up late! :o
Hey WildTexan! Welcome on board!
Always good to be a good poet.
Hope to hear more from you! 8) |
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Wildcard
Joined: 16 Jul 2004
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| Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 7:48 pm Post subject: |
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| We haven't heard from this guy in a while. He must be more wild than I thought. :P |
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