Dang, no nookie yet...

Terry · Joined: 09 Jan 2004 Posts: 60

We were so close! It looked for certain that Superior Girl was going to experience some lovin', gamma style! But that Wonder Broad just *had* to come in and interrupt things and remind them all of their mission to recover the Golden Skull. Drat! Well, at least the newcomer is extremely easy on the eyes. ;) And it's also nice to know that, in case of an emergency, she could be used as a floatation device. Wow - an animated sequence with her would put even the legendary Linda Carter running scenes to shame! Looks like we're going to jump back into the action again - great job on the page, Jeff!

Oh, and I also had a comment about the change to Spreading Eagle's wardrobe. Were you not satisfied with the original concept? Felt like it was too much of a stereotypical outfit for an Indian-American to wear, or was it just a prototype until you found something more to your taste? I don't know if I like the new look or not...it's certainly bright. I was just curious as to the change, is all. Thanks, guys, and keep up the great work!

Terry

ProphetTenebrae · Joined: 09 Jan 2004 Posts: 12

Wonder Broad vs. She Bulk - who is biggest? ;)

Good strip but a shame that She Bulk couldn't sate her lust just yet.

Jeff · Joined: 09 Jan 2004 Posts: 422

The trick is that after She-Bulk has the Big-O, she stops being all big & green, and I'd like to keep her that way for at least a few pages! Will she ever find true love? Stay tuned!

Spreading Eagle's costume - It was a little too much historical accuracy and not enough comic book feel. It just didn't fit in with the spandex crowd, so now she's a little more like Rainmaker from Gen13. She should make her first appearance in Trophy Hunt pretty soon.

Thanks for all the nice comments!

-Jeff

Terry · Joined: 09 Jan 2004 Posts: 60

Well, yes, I had guessed that you wouldn't want She-Bulk reverting to Jessica so soon without having some more "fun" with her first. ;) And I am eager to get back into the action and find out where Voodoo Child's gotten off to.

I thought the design of Eagle's new costume looked familiar, with the crossing over of fabric, leaving the skin of opposing sides bared. Thanks for the explanation, Jeff!

Terry

hollow · Joined: 09 Jan 2004 Posts: 318

Some possibilities on Ms. Eagle:

- Tassels on the boots. In fact, suede boots. And suede gloves. (Ahh, to be propmaster to the superheroes...)

- Instead of the one-piece hide wrap, keep the current spandex on bottom, plus a hide top. With bare midriff.

- Spice up the bangs. I might even say lose the red bands around the ponytails (just what are those called anyway?), allowing the blowing hair effect when the storm comes.

- Bow and quiver slung somewhere. Or tomahawk in the boot. (Heh.) I know it's not in the abilities list, but I don't see why she couldn't be good with a weapon in addition to being able to throw ball lightning.

- Terry was saying the red-on-blue is a bit loud - I agree. Plus, you already have Daisy Cutter and Not Diminished with red-blue themes. Different scheme, maybe less saturated?

The face looks darn near perfect, I'll say that. Looks kinda Cherokeean. The skin tone also looks very good in the pinup; I like it better than the one in the casino...

Jeff · Joined: 09 Jan 2004 Posts: 422

Thanks for the suggestions on the costume. I'll work on tweaking it some more -
(sorry for the briefness, but I'm upgrading my machine and have to re-install everything! blah...)

-Jeff

Phaderus · Joined: 09 Jan 2004 Posts: 28

Jeff: I agree that Spreading Eagles costume is a bit too vibrant, although I do like the cut away body parts. Personally, I'm from the less is more school and prefer the original skimpy costumes in the character bios, especially The Flasher. Even though it may be a bit outdated now, I also liked the old super heroine outfits with the skirts. The full body spandex is okay but is used too frequently.

Ronald: The Games Gallery page might be getting a little too crowded ,maybe just four headings: Casino, puzzles, breakout, and memory. You might also think about a more generalized puzzle app. Maybe let the user select the picture and the number of pieces (square or normal) and provide a high res reward for all of them. That way you could use any of the pin-ups for the pictures and we could select the difficulty based on our preference or time available.

Anyway, that's my two cents, the comics are excellent and I like the new puzzles.

Terry · Joined: 09 Jan 2004 Posts: 60

So going by what you said, Phaderus: "less is more" in regards to the heroines' costuming, you must really be happy with She-Bulk's threads - er, lack of them. ;) (I know I am!) Seriously you have a point about costuming. I like the majority of costuming that Jeff has designed, including The Flasher's current costume (I don't remember seeing her original look, so I can't comment on that). Jeff, I'm glad you're going to do some more tweaking on Spreading Eagle's look, and I know you'll find the right one. :)

I also agree with Phaderus in regards to the Games section, about it seeming a bit crowded. Placing them all under their different headings will not only clear up that page, but give you more space for each gaming category's selections. The puzzles are rapidly becoming one of my favorite games (Strip Breakout and Strip Blackjack still hold the top spots, though!), and the Games section itself is one I really look forward to each time I visit.

Terry

Ronald · Joined: 18 Oct 2003 Posts: 2692

Yes- all comments are valid and great suggestions. It was my intention to break up the games section down into categories a while back once it gets crowded. Fear not!

I run a game site over at eadultgames.com so it'll be setup similar to that. For a majority of the members on justicebabes who came from eadultgames, you probably are already familar with the category options.

For now enjoy the new puzzles! And again- thanks for your support!

-R